Friday, April 13, 2018

 

Notes on repairing my Star Trek Novel

Repairs to Star Trek Novel: ... capt can't shot and they can't figure why. Bridge officers use transporters to de-poop capt and several other people. Picard gives generic access codes for Borg implants to Data who makes modifications that allow normal functioning....Be sure there are others with this problem!...Have several attempts made to cure Captain's pseudo heroin addiction. Have this be caused by half functioning Borg implants...Have scene with Picard overlooking bridge of BERRY when changes are made. Servo face go blank as he totally loses desire for drugs. Mention names of other addicts and later give their reactions. ...Maybe reconsider letting cats loose on alien world. Rewrite. so they are moved to distant shoreline and over millions of years evolve into acoustic creatures in various niches.... Have crewman tell native about scientific method and making experiments, written language (give native priest a written language), math and how equations could describe reality... Need more of a story for when they repopulate Star Fleet Boat...have former CO and CO of the fuel boat hunt for the Omaha Particle and make off with it. Later, it will turn out he traded the Omega Particle for information about location of a galaxy with negative singletons trapped around it's supermassive black hole, techniques for quasi-immorality and becoming ascended into a "Q". Have the CO try the Borg technique and have it fail to the usual A's derision. Then have Q change the CO into a Q. t poo This new Q gives data the complete download on Borg tech and have him help Data make sure cures for pseudo-herionaddiction...


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